There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of public transport company. In your letter - Describe the problems - Explain how these problems are affecting the public - Suggest what changes could be made
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to some newly arising
irregularities in public commute.
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Thank you so much for your time.
Yours Faithfully,
Meera GillUse synonyms
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.