Many people believe that film is a less important art than other forms such as literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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are considered less significant as compared to

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another type

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arts

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literature

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and painting. I totally condemn the idea of giving less

importance

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to films. In

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, I will explain the cause of disagreement with the above statement and why

movies

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should be given more

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. I firmly believe that there are many skills that are involved in making films ,

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however

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still there are some people that consider it of less

importance

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. Writing a good script is an art that contributes to

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of a

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furthermore

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there are many artist that put their role in filmmaking. These all contributions of

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and artists result in a superhit

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that we enjoy watching in the cinemas.

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, in many

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movies

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now-a-days

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there are

animationist

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animations

that

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potato

the whole scenes of

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in a beautiful manner that they made the unreal and

immaginative

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imaginative

imagination

into a real image. These

artist

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are visual painters that

brings

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imaginations into moving virtual images.

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give better

entertaintment

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entertainment

in less time as compared to

literature

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, painting and other

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, they are a good source of time passing, that can be watched anywhere and at any time. There are many institutes and universities that provide degrees in filmmaking.

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first

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filmmaking institute started in 1919 in Moscow, after which it became

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a significant art that has been taught worldwide.

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brings me to my point that with changing demands and

intrests

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interests

of people. films and

movies

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are getting more

importance

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. All in all,

film

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was considered as of less

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as compared to other

arts

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literature

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and painting by many people.

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, I totally condemn

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idea, as

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consider

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movie

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the movie

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as of more

imporatance

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importance

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than any other form of art, because

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it self

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itself

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combination

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many

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any

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type

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arts

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i.e.

literature

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, songs, acting, animation and much more.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

aesthetic
artistic expression
cultural significance
historical context
impactful
literary works
masterpiece
medium (e.g., medium of film)
narrative techniques
painting styles
pedagogical
perception
profound
technological advancement
visual storytelling

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