People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

Individuals believe that a better way to minimise the

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rate is to provide maximum

prison

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punishment

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whilst, others argue that there are other ways.

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essay presents that long jail stays

punishment

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is the better option and how increasing

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patrolling is not

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argument with a reasoned conclusion.

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, if the government allows the court to give aa higher number of years in

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as a

punishment

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for

crimes

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will be a good message in the country.

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will allow the criminals to realise their mistake for breaking the law and they do not commit

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after completing their

time

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in jail.

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,

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can provide a general message in the city that the consequences of

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committing

a

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is

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not easy and they will fear to commit the

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.

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, the number of

cime

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times

is reduced

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average.

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, according to The China Times newspaper, after China passed a

legistation

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legislation

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that can give higher years of a

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sentence for

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, the number of

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has decreased dramatically.

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, many say that increasing the patrolling of

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will reduce the

amount

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of

crimes

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in the city. Regular routine patrolling by

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vehicles will create a fear in offenders of getting caught so they do not

comit

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commit

a

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. Despite

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, the

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criminal-minded

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criminal

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minded individuals who are determined can plan

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to skip the

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rounds, but if there is maximum

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punishment

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law they will think

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time

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before taking the law into their hands.

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, the people with

crime

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intensions

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intentions

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can observe the pattern of

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patrols and predict the exact

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of

next

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patrolling, so that they can have a window to commit a

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. In conclusion, citizens

argure

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argue

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that longer

prison

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sentence can reduce

crime

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, as

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will send a clear picture of the consequences of breaking the laws,

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, others think that high patrolling from

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in the area

reduces

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reduce

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the

crime

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.

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essay

believe

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that

sentincing

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sentencing

more years of

prison

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time

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will reduce the

crime

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as it creates great fear in offenders to do a

crime

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.