Attitude is as important as knowledge in a test situation. To what extent do you agree?

Some society thinks that testing events are influenced by attitude more than education. I strongly disagree with the statement because the ability
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information is the same important as the nation's
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to details. On
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hand, a psychological condition of crowds
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on
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their tests
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can change
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the results
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of it. So
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who have an enormous experience give some recommendations
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to relax before exams
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it is one of the
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effective methods for preparing in comparison with
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all
nights
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. Without sleeping tested population become
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or other kinds of nervousness
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block
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our thoughts
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testing
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time.
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, the national
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of testing pupils showed that children took a good assessment without fear
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up
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it is better in comparison with the tired kids
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were worried all the time.
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, motivation as a form of attitude helps to be ready before tests because tested children program themselves for success.
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,
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school
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of
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demonstrated results that children were more confident during testing when they had watched a
motivation
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movie. On
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other hand, the ability is
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same important part to be ready for testing because all family start from the learning process. Out of specific information of the subject, we can't pass
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.
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they increase their level of the brain. In conclusion, insight and attitude are both
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important
part
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for testing
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population
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the population
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have
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no
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to separate these forms of
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.

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task response
State your view clearly in the start and keep to one clear stance. Give 2-3 simple reasons and one clear example. End with a short conclusion that restates your view.
coherence cohesion
Make each paragraph hold one main idea. Use simple linking words like first, also, but, and finally to show how ideas are linked. Follow a basic order: intro, 2-3 ideas, conclusion.
content
You show a real attempt to discuss the topic and compare ideas of attitude and test results.
content
There is an effort to give examples to back points, which helps support the view.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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