Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter apologise for not meeting him/her explain why you did not contact him/her earlier suggest a time and place to meet in the future

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Dear

Tairan

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Taiwan

, I hope you are in good health. I am writing to apologise for being unable to meet you on the scheduled date. Earlier, I shared with you that, I would be

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your city

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25th to 27th January

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2021 for attending two official meetings. During that visit, I will meet you at your home on the 2nd day, but unfortunately, I could not do

this

. The fact is, suddenly I was instructed by my supervisor to make a sudden visit to one of our stakeholders for signing an important treaty; I had to follow the instruction as it was an urgent task and very significant for us in terms of maintaining a corporate relationship.

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why I was unable to visit your place. I hope you will understand that circumstance and pardon me for

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inconvenience. I have a plan to make a holiday in the

month in Cox'sbazar. It would be great if you join the tour with me as

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aware that you

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like to spend time on the sea beach. Again, I cordially apologize for not meeting you

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and looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Taslima

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

198 words

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