Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is no doubt that abortion rates have risen sharply during the

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decade. While some people believe

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method should be banned others argue that governments should legalise it. In

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essay, I will debate both arguments and I will support with examples why I tend to agree with the latter view. On the one hand, citizens who take the view that abortion should be illegal believe that the fetus is alive.

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, they propose that any life is more important than another, and any woman has the right to decide if the baby is going to die or live.

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, these days, a large number of adolescents carry out abortions because they do not want to be mothers so early.

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, they kill a human

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of giving the baby into adoption which would contribute to

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a new family. If governments allow miscarriages, the number of babies that would not

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are going to rise under no control.

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, taking any decision about your own body constitutes a universal right.

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, any rule can neither prohibit to change one part of your body nor

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you to continue with the unwanted pregnancy.

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, health condition is a key factor influencing the decision because any law must interfere with any health policy. To illustrate, there are some situations where the mother's life is in danger of death and the only

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option is seeking the miscarriage. To reach a conclusion,

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some people may think that abortion's illegalization is of benefit to society, an obvious drawback has to be taken into account which is women rights. I firmly believe that women must have the choice to accept or refuse the pregnancy.

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