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Some governments say how many children a family can hare in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree? (2GT-1;08/02/21)

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One of the major problem in
this
 21st century is
growth
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the growth
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 of
population
. There are
people
 who
says
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 that
government
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the government
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 can
control
 the
population
 through taxes whereas others
tends
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 to disagree with
this
 opinion.
However
, I believe that there are numerous ways to
control
 the
growth
 of
population
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instead
 of collecting taxes from
people
. Educating the public to know the necessity of controlling
population
growth
 will give effective results.
For example
, the developed countries like
Sweden
 were counselled their citizens to know the importance of controlling
population
growth
as a result
 within
few
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 decades
the
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Sweden
 completely controlled
population
. Due to
this
,
people
 who
lives
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 in
sweden
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Sweden
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 are leading peaceful and Successful life. Move over
people
 in
sweden
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Sweden
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 are leading quality life as compared to the highly populated countries.
This
 would be possible as the government of
sweden
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Sweden
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 continuously educated their citizens to know the importance of controlling
population
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the population
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. Another way to
control
the
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population
growth
 is by amending strict
law
.
For instance
, the government of China strictly passed a
law
 that every family should have only one
children
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who ever
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whoever
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 did not obey the
law
 should be penalised and sentenced for
minimum
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a minimum
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 of 10 years.
As a result
 of
this
 new
law
, China
were
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 effectively controlled their Country's
population
.
Thus
,
people
 in
china
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China
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 are leading
stress-free
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 and happy life. To Conclude, while
people
 may vary with their opinion but l believe that continuous education and passing strict
law
 will give effective results to
control
 the
population
growth
 rather than collecting taxes.
Submitted by Saravanan RS on

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