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The Internet is the best place to find information. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nobody would dispute the fact that the
internet
 has become more and more popular in society. Some
people
 believe that the
internet
 is the best way to search for
information
 and find answers. I agree that
people
 should make use of online
resources
. In
this
 essay, I will give reasons for my opinion. The reasons why
people
 should find
information
 online are manifold.
Firstly
, it is true that
internet
 users can have access to a wider range of
resources
such
 as various websites or all kinds of books.
For example
, when
people
 want to figure out how to solve a problem, they are more likely to find various answers online than a local library.
Further
, it is obvious that online can save
people
 a lot of time because the
internet
 does not close, and users can use it any time they want,
hence
people
 can work more efficiently. To be more specific,
people
 want to know the answer, they can find the
information
 they need any time. It is evident that there are no physical boundary issues with the
internet
 so that
people
 can get access to the
internet
 everywhere.
For example
, workers can have the opportunity to work from home, and they can still get the
information
 they need to work efficiently.
Although
 there might be some misleading
information
 online, the official website and
resources
 are available, and there are always communities where you can raise a question or a concern.
For instance
,
people
 can read news online, and other users can answer the questions you asked. In conclusion, there is a significant amount of benefits to find
information
 online
such
 as more
resources
, efficient, and no physical boundary limitations.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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