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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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One of the most important topics of the 21st century is our news
sources
. Every day the number of various sites in the online format is increasing, which replace
books
 and
newspapers
 for us. Everyone wondered whether these types of information
sources
 will disappear or will they still remain. Undoubtedly, these
sources
 of information have certain advantages. Despite the loss of demand, there are still many people who still use
newspapers
 and
books
 as their primary source of information.
Newspapers
 and
books
 are less harmful to humans.
Firstly
, electronic gadgets have a negative effect on our eyes, and
secondly
,
newspapers
 and
books
 are easy to carry with you to places where you may not have conditions for online reading.
However
, do not forget that along with positive aspects, there are
also
 negative ones. The number of active users of
newspapers
 and
books
 is decreasing every day. These types of
sources
 become
only
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 harmful waste for our surrounding nature.
In addition
, people spend money on
newspapers
 and
books
, which is
also
 not profitable. It's easier to read the same article online for free. In brief, I believe that with
such
 a rate of development of technology, it is not a fact that in 30 years
newspapers
 will exist at all.
Therefore
, I fully agree with
this
 statement and think that it is not profitable to print
newspapers
 and
books
 in the 21st century due to their low demand.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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