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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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It is argued by some that it was much
easilier
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easier
 to live when technology was simpler.
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 essay disagrees with
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 statement because smartphones save
people
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's time and the
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 improved education. Advanced technologies help
people
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 save a great deal of time which can be spent on more important activities. With
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a smartphone
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smartphone
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,
such
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 as
IPhones
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iPhones
 and Samsungs,
people
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 may make calls and send messages by the one click of a button and do not
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wait
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 the response for several days.
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, in the past
people
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 had to write a letter,
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 bring it to the post and wait
untill
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until
 it was delivered over an uncertain period of time. Now,
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, life became more automatic and quick. Technologies could
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 improve modern education.
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, by surfing the
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,
people
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 get invaluable sources of information that were not
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accessible
 in the past and that may help individuals to advance their knowledge and make a study
proccess
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process
 more exciting.
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, a recent Cambridge University survey found that 92% of students use the
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 for study purposes. In conclusion, life became
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simpler
 with technologies because smartphones significantly ease
people
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's lives and the
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 made education better.
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