Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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care. The argument whether the opportunity to choose everything should be given to
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or not is the topic which is both supported and refuted by many. A reasoned conclusion is drawn after analysing both sides of the argument. On the one hand, giving
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who only think of themselves and not care about society. What I mean by
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomy
  • Consequence-awareness
  • Self-centered
  • Informal decision-making education
  • Child development
  • Age-appropriate choices
  • Cognitive growth
  • Fostering independence
  • Parental guidance
  • Societal norms
  • Interpersonal consideration
  • Balance of freedom
  • Individualism versus collectivism
  • Experience-based learning
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