1) University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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Studying abroad is gaining popularity nowadays ,
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a part of the
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university
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students choose to travel for their education . The advantages of
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a trend are the opportunity to learn a new language and the chance to discover different traditions ,
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there are disadvantages , namely the feeling of loneliness or the difficulty to adapt . In my
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there are more advantages than disadvantages connected to international scholarship and these will be presented in the essay . Arguably , one of the drawbacks could be the fact that youngsters are very attached to their family and friends,
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they find it extremely difficult to create new relationships. Loneliness could negatively impact their ability to learn and the level of concentration . Another disadvantage
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would be experienced by the learners who find difficult to adapt to new rules as well as to a new lifestyle . Some people follow a certain routine every day ,
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a long term change could be a disturbing factor for them .
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, some international students are confirming that they cannot cope with the difference of the time between the home country and the placement one and they are not able to rest enough . Turning to the advantages , as a student in another
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the spoken language would inevitably be learnt .
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could be a boosting skill for a possible high position in a desirable place since most of the big companies prefer to employ bilingual individuals . Another plus could be the opportunity to learn about another culture and experience different rituals which are only possible for young children . The level of knowledge would
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be improved and may be useful for future situations .
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, in India as a sign of respect when visiting someone's house , the guest has to wash their hands and take their shoes
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,
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tradition could only be seen if visiting one of these houses . In conclusion ,
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some learners may find difficult to build friendships and are not capable to overcome obstacles
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as new rules , the opportunity to learn a new language and experience different cultures are
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outweighing .
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