In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

In several rudimentary

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detention is considered as

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appropriate punishment for conviction.

However

, an array of masses support in proffering educational services. I strongly support the latter view of the statement and ideas would be captivated in the following paragraphs. There are a plethora of reasons behind favouring

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teaching

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amenities to the offenders. The foremost cause is concerned with the discipline. The knowledge imparted at the institutes stimulate the folks to enrich themselves with a bundle of moral values and other sorts of soft-skills including patience, obedience, teamwork, coordination, etcetera.

As a result

, an empty mind which is a devil's workshop would be replaced with the value of

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hard work

and they would have no time to reminisce offensive activities.

For example

, an employed individual would remain strangled in his professional and personal life eventually, the negative thoughts would automatically get overridden with by the passage of time.

Furthermore

, in most of the developing countries, there has been a drastic rise in poverty and health ailments as

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majority

of the populace reside on a breadline and sometimes it is a herculean task for them to make the ends meet,

as a result

, they adopt the hands of

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in order to quench their thirst to feed their families and pay for the health treatments.

Therefore

, if they would

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the academic knowledge, the robberies conducted by them would get reduced or eliminated because they would be potent enough to live from hand to mouth and would

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with no reason to perform any sort of illegal deed. To conclude,

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, it is quite essential to offer severe punishment to wrongdoers to grasp the nettle of illicit actions, yet the significance of the teaching facilities cannot be neglected.

Thus

, it is

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of

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the

government to take adequate decision when it comes to conviction because everyone has a right to obtain a new lease on life.