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In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

#countries #prison #crime #people #education #disagree？
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 detention is considered as
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 appropriate punishment for conviction.
However
, an array of masses support in proffering educational services. I strongly support the latter view of the statement and ideas would be captivated in the following paragraphs. There are a plethora of reasons behind favouring
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teaching
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 amenities to the offenders. The foremost cause is concerned with the discipline. The knowledge imparted at the institutes stimulate the folks to enrich themselves with a bundle of moral values and other sorts of soft-skills including patience, obedience, teamwork, coordination, etcetera.
As a result
, an empty mind which is a devil's workshop would be replaced with the value of
hardwork
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hard work
 and they would have no time to reminisce offensive activities.
For example
, an employed individual would remain strangled in his professional and personal life eventually, the negative thoughts would automatically get overridden with by the passage of time.
Furthermore
, in most of the developing countries, there has been a drastic rise in poverty and health ailments as
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majority
 of the populace reside on a breadline and sometimes it is a herculean task for them to make the ends meet,
as a result
, they adopt the hands of
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 in order to quench their thirst to feed their families and pay for the health treatments.
Therefore
, if they would
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 the academic knowledge, the robberies conducted by them would get reduced or eliminated because they would be potent enough to live from hand to mouth and would
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 with no reason to perform any sort of illegal deed. To conclude,
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, it is quite essential to offer severe punishment to wrongdoers to grasp the nettle of illicit actions, yet the significance of the teaching facilities cannot be neglected.
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, it is
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 of
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the
 government to take adequate decision when it comes to conviction because everyone has a right to obtain a new lease on life.
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