The Internet is the best place to find information. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, technologies have become an integral part of everyone's life and people got used to
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an opportunity to find all needed material online. It is believed by some part of the population that the
Internet
is the best place to find information.
To begin
with, on the one hand, the main disadvantage of using
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is that there is no quality assurance and the
data
found on different websites might be irrelevant or even false.
This
is because of the
fact
that not only can
evryone
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everyone
post anything if he wants to but,
furthermore
, it is extremely complicated to find a reliable source written by scientists since the majority of them prefer to write books and other paper materials.
Therefore
, when looking for
knowledge
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the
Internet
people might be fooled and remember untrue
data
.
For instance
, recent research has shown that more than 40% of what we can find online is posted by ordinary people who have no
knowledge
in the area they are
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writing
about.
Moreover
, another drawback of
this
development could be the
fact
that neither scientific websites nor well-known Wikipedia
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not checked for accuracy.
This
is due to the
fact
that
ther
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there
their
the
is a tremendous number of sites and it might be extremely hard,
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and costly to verify all the material being posted and check its quality.
As a result
, not only might students find
innaccurate
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inaccurate
data
and get unreliable
knowledge
but
also
teachers and professors who are likely to find some info
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the
Internet
can be fooled.
For example
, scientists suggest that the major reason why it has become harder for children to perceive school
knowledge
is that they have already read a lot of online articles which might be useless and misleading and
this
, in turn, littered their heads with unnecessary stuff. Eventually, to conclude, I disagree with the
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Internet
is the best source of info since,
firstly
, anyone can post whatever he thinks is true on the browsers and,
secondly
, the
data
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and checked for accuracy.
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