The Internet is the best place to find information. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world, technologies have become an integral part of everyone's life and people got used to
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an opportunity to find all needed material online. It is believed by some part of the population that the
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is the best place to find information.
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with, on the one hand, the main disadvantage of using
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is that there is no quality assurance and the
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found on different websites might be irrelevant or even false.
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is because of the
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that not only can
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, it is extremely complicated to find a reliable source written by scientists since the majority of them prefer to write books and other paper materials.
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, when looking for
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the
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people might be fooled and remember untrue
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, recent research has shown that more than 40% of what we can find online is posted by ordinary people who have no
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in the area they are
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about.
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, another drawback of
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development could be the
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that neither scientific websites nor well-known Wikipedia
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not checked for accuracy.
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is due to the
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that
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is a tremendous number of sites and it might be extremely hard,
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and costly to verify all the material being posted and check its quality.
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, not only might students find
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and get unreliable
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but
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teachers and professors who are likely to find some info
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the
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can be fooled.
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, scientists suggest that the major reason why it has become harder for children to perceive school
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is that they have already read a lot of online articles which might be useless and misleading and
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, in turn, littered their heads with unnecessary stuff. Eventually, to conclude, I disagree with the
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is the best source of info since,
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, anyone can post whatever he thinks is true on the browsers and,
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, the
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and checked for accuracy.

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