Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individuals to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Stopping
crime
have
become a global challenge. Change the verb form
has
Therefore
a cross-section of individuals
believe
that the onus of preventing Change the verb form
believes
crime
in a
our society should be on the government, while others are of the opinion that Remove the article
apply
individuals
should defend themselves against criminal elements. This
essay will discuss the importants
of both views with relevant examples.
Preventing Correct your spelling
importance
crime
in any society is extremely expensive, as such
government
should play a huge part in safeguarding the lives and properties of their citizens. institutions like the Add an article
the government
a government
police
, navy and air force should be adequately equipped and motivated to carry out their duties in maintaining law and order. Also
, people
should assist the police
with critical information which will lead to arrest
of Add an article
the arrest
thiefs
in our society. Correct your spelling
thieves
For example
, the arrest of a popular thief in Nigeria called Anini who was terrorising the whole country in 2015 was made possible by his girlfriends
information given to the Change to a genitive case
girlfriend's
girlfriends'
police
.
Individuals
protecting themselves will give opportunistic people
powers of putting laws into their hands. voilent
will be the other of the day, Correct your spelling
violent
its
is a popular Change the pronoun
it
believe
when you empower Replace the word
belief
people
wrongly they missuse
it. Correct your spelling
misuse
For instance
, if there is a law for people
to arm themselves at every slightest provocation they will shoot. A recent survey in the united states of America says that the crime
rate in Arizona is on the rise because of the number of gun owners. For example
, in March 2019, a gun runner went on a shooting spree in Arizona killing a hundred and ten people
a situation that would have been avoided if there was no law for people
to carry guns.
In conclusion, i
believe Change the capitalization
I
government
should protect its citizens at the same time Add an article
the government
individuals
should be security conscious and report to the police
who are more equipped to deal with any security challenge.Submitted by iyamahelias on
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