You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Dear John, How have you been?
Its
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been so long since we were
last
in touch on
facebook
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. I read your
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message about news items in my
country
. I am very happy
share
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to share
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the news about my
country
with you. Recently in my
country
, one person made a
gusiness
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business
world book record because he has a
super power
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of weight lifting. He can lift
upto
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up to
600kg and
that is
new
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world record.
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,
their
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are some
another
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news
rumoers
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rumours
coming up about your
country
president coming to see my nation's president.
Moreover
, people are so interested to see both the president on one stage because both nation's people
wants
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to work together and it will be
alot
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a lot
easier for both countries large and small businesses produce a product and ship one place to another and
this
story relates to you because
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easier for you to find a job in my
country
. I hope
this
information
fulfill
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your need and
i
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I
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will see you soon.
your
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you're
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sincerly
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sincerely
, Dave
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