some people believe that governments should ban dangerous sports even though others claim they should have the freedom to choose a sport to their liking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Sports
are one of the means to rejuvenate oneself. It is very important to understand that all the Use synonyms
sports
have some risks involved, but if that Use synonyms
sport
involves too much risk, it should be considered dangerous. Use synonyms
Therefore
, in-spite of some people's opine of freedom of choice of whichever Linking Words
sport
they like, I agree to the Use synonyms
government
's decision to ban dangerous Use synonyms
sports
because of the Use synonyms
life
risk the Use synonyms
sport
involves and the chances of carrying out criminal activity in between.
Every game, even the threatening ones, is played with good spirit and with good intent. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
sports
as Use synonyms
such
are considered celebration in the hosting regions. Linking Words
However
, if someone loses their Linking Words
life
in participating Use synonyms
such
celebration, it will turn into a sad point of their and their family's Linking Words
life
. We entrust the Use synonyms
government
to ensure safety for us, and we would turn to them for answers if something went wrong. Events Use synonyms
such
as jallikattu, which is a celebrated Linking Words
sport
in the state of Kerala in India, have significant Use synonyms
life
threat involved. All cheer the fight between raging bulls and a few persons. Every year minimum of 2-3 casualties regularly happens. Use synonyms
Thus
, in the light of Linking Words
such
dismal incidents, it is better to ban those games.
Every country is suffering from criminal activities happening in their region. These criminals always look for Linking Words
such
events where there are many people gathering so that they can carry out activities Linking Words
such
as drugs supply or even murder. Linking Words
Hence
, dangerous games like these become one of the means to carry out murder and come out clean as the known Linking Words
life
risk involved. In the recently concluded survey, it came out that at least 5-6 people die in Use synonyms
such
events, many of which involve a plot to kill someone. As we question the concerned authority for Linking Words
such
incidents, it is obvious for them to restrict these Linking Words
sports
to foil Use synonyms
such
accidents.
To conclude, I would like to reinstate the notion that the Linking Words
government
should ban these Use synonyms
life
-threatening Use synonyms
sports
, even though communities are asking for democratic rights of freedom for choosing the games they like. We cannot expect an answer from the Use synonyms
government
if we want to play Use synonyms
such
risky Linking Words
sports
Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite