Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible , while others argue that it has had a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It's true, that with an appearance of the opportunity to buy cheap
flights
and availability,
air
flights
have impacted on the Earth, there is an opportunity has appeared to make
flights
to abroad and
also
fly through a huge distance, but there is a negative consequence of
this
action. These essay will discuss both points of views and give my own opinion about that.
Firstly
. In 21 century, It's difficult to imagine someone doesn't use an
air
flight
because it's a great chance not to waste your own time on the road and make a
flight
for a short time.
Secondly
, when any country is situated from your homeland, but you would like to visit
this
country, a distance between countries can be thousands of kilometres, and of course you would use the
air
flight
, as it's cheaper, faster.
For example
, I live in the USA, and my dream was to visit Australia, both countries are divided by thousands of kilometres and without an opportunity to purchase an
air
ticket, my dream wouldn't come true. In the other hand, We can see a negative consequence of the use of the
air
flight
on our environmental, a harmful which we bring our planet. The
flight
, which produces tonnes of toxic
substances
and
then
these
substances
pollute our
air
, which we breath, and
hence
, we harm ourselves. Emissions which the
flights
produce in the atmosphere can cause serious disease,
such
as heart disease, cancer of lungs, heart pressure. To illustrate
this
, according to a survey, which was published In Guardian, only for 2018-2020, the death toll has raised about 8.9 million of people all over the world, it was caused by enormous emissions of toxic
substances
. To conclude, I would like to say, we shouldn't cancel from the use of
flights
and even close factories, which produce and emit hazardous
substances
, but the government of any countries must oblige manufacturers to take measures, which will let to avoid toxic emissions in the atmosphere.
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