Some teachers agree that group studies are helpful to students whereas some teachers are it is good and students study alone. Where you think which one is good as per your opinion and justify it.
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that the process of study within a class group is more beneficial , Correct your spelling
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others are convinced that self-study could be way more productive . In my Add the comma(s)
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and reach a conclusion .
On the one hand , supporters claim that certain lectures are meant to be presented face to face . Correct your spelling
perspectives
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, the information could only be clear if relevant examples follow , Linking Words
therefore
the tutors detain the ability to transmit to their learners the explanation required . Linking Words
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effective for the reason that the courses could be shared with more individuals Correct your spelling
financially
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the same time . In a recent study carried out by the London University , the Director confirmed that in 2018 they managed to save money to invest in facilities Verify preposition usage
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grup
classes gain the most popularity .
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group
On the other hand
, critics think that the pupils could face distraction when they learn on their own . Linking Words
Although
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they are able to carry out the assignments in their own time , the detrimental factor could be that their level of concentration could be diminished by their electronic devices .To continue , proponents Remove the comma
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loose
their motivation since there is no authority to check their progress . Correct your spelling
lose
Sometime
children misjudge the importance of the knowledge accumulated throughout and they need close guidance which in many cases are not available if their parents are at work . Replace the word
Sometimes
For example
, most schools in Austria adopted the program which allows students to attend the physical classes and their results are considerably decreasing .
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