Some people believe that children who are given pocket money every week have less problems managing money when they become adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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people believe that the pupils who receive money weekly from their parents

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positively impacts their future because they will have knowledge about finances from

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age . I totally disagree with

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perspective and

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essay will present strong arguments to support my opinion .

To begin

with ,

this

strategy would undoubtedly create a false image of the value of the capital .

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, children should learn that the material reward is gained throughout work ,

therefore

their family should allocate small tasks which could be followed by a recompense .

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the financial remuneration would be actually a more helpful factor for their adult life since they already know that a job could bring financial satisfaction .

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, the scientists carried out researches connected to the youngster's behaviour and they found out that the pupils tend to appreciate more the funds if they worked hard for them . To continue,critics

also

claim that children should only focus on activities designed for their age ,

otherwise

they would end up focusing on how to reach financial independence .

This

would be a negative factor for the subject because they could refuse to follow a high education and

instead

prefer to be employed . To continue , there are other methods which could be helpful to guide the young person in the right direction to avoid financial issues ,

such

as educational games .

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,Monopoly is a very well known activity which uses fake money to be exchanged for properties or other goods and it could be a source of information as well as a fun way of awareness towards the capital management . In conclusion , in my opinion as far as I am concerned the financial allowance would not be a solution of material management for the adult life . Parents could use other methods to enhance their understanding of the money .