Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that media is the main
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of information about social events. There is an increasing tendency to focus on
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issues which can be destructive to people rather than illustrate positive development. I partly agree with
this
statement since all media should reflect the true state of affairs. On the one hand, news has a strong influence on people and,
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their conceptions about the state of social movements, the economy
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policy. In fact, consuming information about negative situations can have a significant effect on humans, making them more depressive and pessimistic.
Likewise
, recent scientific research has shown that being in stressful conditions may increase the rate of
public's
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violence and unrest.
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is because the news
constantly
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reported as proof of the uselessness of governments. Eventually, publishing reports can trigger the obstacles to establishing strained relationships in society.
On the other hand
, media provides conversance of actual topics. From that perspective, focusing on emergencies determines fast reactions of authorities and
public
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who can prevent the spread
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effects.
For instance
, if the report is published without delay, the outcomes of
such
disasters as
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tsunamis
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tsunami
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or
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earthquakes
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earthquake
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will be averted and a huge number of citizens can be saved.
Moreover
, the intelligence about obstacles may raise inhabitants' awareness of social issues
such
as robbery. It can result in avoiding these risks in individuals' lives.
Therefore
, publishing is able to minimize consequences before the issues become colossal. In conclusion,
although
destructive intelligence can
determine
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discomfort and stress among the public, it
also
may
cease
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reduce
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the prevalence of the outcomes of the disaster.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pessimistic outlook
  • exposed to negative news
  • stress and anxiety
  • success stories
  • balanced reporting
  • well-informed public
  • rational decisions
  • sense of helplessness
  • apathy
  • skew public perception
  • mistrust in institutions
  • enhance well-being
  • mental health
  • manipulate public opinion
  • serve specific agendas
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