Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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education is an important factor for the learner's future . Some individuals believe that students with academic results should be

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classes from the

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who's achievements are lower , whereas others think that they should study together .

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essay will analyse both perspectives and reach a conclusion . On the one hand , supporters claim that their motivation could be increased if students with lower grades would join the same class as the others with high results .

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, it is very common for youngsters to copy the behaviour of the

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that they spend time with ,

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the pupils

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learning

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is lower could undoubtedly maximise .

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proponents support

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because it would enable the weaker learners to see that high scores could be reached as long as they make efforts

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as intensive study and determination .

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, in a recent study carried out by the London University , the participants confirmed that they feel more motivated to achieve academic levels since they joined classes where the student's

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is higher than theirs.

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, critics explain that the concentration of the well-prepared learners could diminish since most of the information would be built at a lower

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for the others .

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they argue that the schools should allow individuals with

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capability to join the same university . The proponents think that

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development would be negative since the students with different skills have

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different interests and they could sadly influence the choices of the academics .

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would mean that the well-graded pupils could be tempted to engage in dangerous activities after courses since they would meet people with lower interest in learning .

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, most of the children who's learning abilities are low spent most of the time in the gaming places

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of using these hours to master the areas where they lack knowledge . In conclusion ,

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the mixed classes could be beneficial for the

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with fewer abilities towards education to motivate them , I believe that would be detrimental for the academic

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because their attention would be distracted and the

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of concentration could drop .