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Do you think that modern technology, such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information?

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The advancements in technology have changed every aspect of human life, and the
information
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 is one of them. People's interest is rapidly shifting from actual
books
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 to the
internet
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 for collecting data, because of the convenience and cost-effective measures it provides. I believe that in upcoming years the
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 would totally replace
books
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, reasons for which I would discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
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 of all, the
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 has provided the unimaginable convenience of using an
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source
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, which is impossible to have while using the paper
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. A
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 or any other
source
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 online can be carried along anywhere in mobile phone, without any extra effort ,unlike
books
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. Along with it, a
book
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 can be downloaded on the go without any need to go to libraries to borrow it, which has
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 the fast-paced lifestyle.
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, the audible
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 available online are
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 becoming popular, as they can be accessed while doing other tasks,
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 as gym, household chores and so on. Moving ahead, the cost-effective features of modern technology is attracting more and more people to switch to it. The printing cost of a
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 is very high which makes the prices go up, it discourage some consumers,
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, publishing a
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 online is way cheaper than actual publication resulting in lower e-
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 prices.
This
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 is has encouraged both writers and reader to choose the
internet
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 rather than printed material, which would continue in future. In conclusion, the
internet
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 is becoming a more common
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 for retrieving
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 with its convenient and inexpensive approach
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 and would replace the
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 as the main
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 of
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