Many people are doing their shopping in the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online?
It is argued that
,
shopping is considered as the most famous free Remove the comma
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time
activity whilst others believe that it have
both advantages and drawbacks. Change the verb form
has
This
essay presents that an advertisement is the
primary agent for Change the article
a
this
cause and economic hardships if the greatest effect it has on the person and the community with a reasoned conclusion.
To begin
with, commercials play a significant role in increased purchasing habit of the
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individuals
. Moreover
, because of the convincing advertisements, several people think that if they posses
certain things or wear trending clothes, they are respected in the society. Correct your spelling
possess
Thus
, numerous citizens go shopping to buy those things in their free time
. For example
, a recent study conducted by The Newyork Times,
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,
2 out of 5 Remove the comma
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person
go shopping to buy a product that they have seen in an advertisement.
Change to a plural noun
people
On the other hand
, this
pattern causes financial hardships to the individuals
and the
society. Remove the article
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In other words
, many people take loan
from their relatives and Add an article
a loan
freinds
or the financial institution to satisfy their shopping Correct your spelling
friends
habbits
. Correct your spelling
habits
This
action puts them under a financial debt that they cannot repay. To exemplify, most of the colleges' students buy new clothes every week with a credit card, eventhough
they know that they will not be able to clear the credit on Correct your spelling
even though
time
. Hence
, the shopping trend has negative effects overall on our community.
In conclusion, purchasing new things have become highly
popular activity in the free Add an article
a highly
time
of the individuals
as a result
of the advertisements on different media and it has counter
effect on the society by putting Add an article
a counter
individuals
in debts that they cannot pay back
.Correct your spelling
payback
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...