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Some people think that range of technology currently available increasing gap between rich people and poor people . Others think that it is causing opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

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Part of the population
tend
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tends
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 to believe that the advancement of technological tools has increased the difference between
wealth
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wealthy
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people
 and poor ones, while others claim that new
technology
 has helped to diminish the social gap among members in society.
This
 essay will discuss both perspectives in the
next
 paragraphs and give an opinion afterwards. On the one hand, it is important to say that humanity still faces problems to deal with social and financial
unequality
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inequality
.
Therefore
, part of the population claims that high
technology
 is still not available for everyone and the investment to access cutting edge
technology
 is not affordable for the majority of the world. To illustrate that situation, Ellon Musk, one of the richest person in the world, owner of Tesla Company, has been investing billions of dollars in high
technology
 to improve their computing systems and creating an autonomous vehicle that could lead Tesla to the wealthier company in the world and ten times more valuable than the sum of their competitors.
Nevertheless
,
although
 high
technology
 is not cheap, the advancement of the internet and
low cost
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 technological tools
such
 as affordable smartphones and computers,
for instance
, has helped numerous
people
 to increase their productive time, access and share useful content on the web and develop creative ideas to solve others problems.
Consequently
, the number of poor
people
 who can use these technologies in order to earn more money and succeed in their financial lives is considerable.
For instance
,
people
 who create contents for the Youtube video
plataform
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platform
 make millions of dollars each year sharing their ideas on the internet using their current smartphones. To conclude,
although
 rich
people
 still make money using unaffordable resources for the majority of
people
, I believe that the advancement of
technology
 has helped poor
people
 to access new opportunities and create wealth using creativity.
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