Recent advances in medical science have resulted in increased life expectancy over the past few years. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Medical inventions are becoming boon for many individuals. Some of the different type of imaging and x-ray services as some diseases and problems are hard to detect at early stages.
present day
researches have got Add a hyphen
present-day
positive
outcome to enlarge human life cycle compared to former years. Add an article
the positive
This
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages before forming an opinion.
To begin
with supremacy, nowadays the medical drugs works
faster and more effective than its former versions. It is becoming normal for people to live Change the verb form
work
upto
Correct your spelling
up to
age
of 70-80 years. Add an article
the age
For
example
in recent times patients rush to hospitals or clinics if they feel Add a comma
,example
imbalance
in blood pressure or diabetes but with current technological developments there are many Add an article
an imbalance
pocket size
gadgets are available to monitor blood pressures and level of diabetes at Add a hyphen
pocket-size
comfort
of home. Keeping a track of health records is very crucial and it helps our bodies to tackle with any upcoming disease.
On another side, there are some drawbacks as well. In past years there were many health conditions Add an article
the comfort
occuring
due to side effects of antibiotics and daily usage of medicines. Correct your spelling
occurring
This
is causing more physical and mental strain to
many people. Verify preposition usage
for
For
example
if Add a comma
,example
any one
got allergies or bad reactions they need to go throughCorrect your spelling
anyone
Add an article
a
the
Moreover
many individuals are getting addict
to medicines because it keeps them energised Add an article
the addict
an addict
through out
the day.
To sum up, medicines are very important for the growth and development of human beings Correct your spelling
throughout
however
the negative effects can be treated with more advanced researchSubmitted by cheema_22 on
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