buying things online is becoming more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Trend
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of buying
products
online is rapidly burgeoning
gloablly
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globally
global
.
Although
there are a few demerits,
merits
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the merits
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of buying things online outweigh
this
because online
products
are cheap and
avalaible
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available
with different options.
Firstly
, online
products
are
avalaible
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available
at cheap rates. The reason behind
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the economical
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price is that online these are sold by manufacturers. They directly sell to consumers. If these
products
are sold in markets, the middlemen add their costs. The final price increased due to these
addittional
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additional
costs. The final buyer has to bear
this
;
nevertheless
, on
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the internet
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internet
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these
products
are sold at
less
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prices because no
such
costs are included.
For instance
,
a
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recent research states that
same
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the same
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products
have
less
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prices on internet websites as compare to offline markets.
Secondly
,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • fluency
  • communicate
  • cognitive skills
  • cultural awareness
  • opportunities
  • globalized world
  • job market
  • interact
  • linguistic abilities
  • cultural exchange
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • foreign travel
  • personal growth
  • academic achievement
  • self-confidence
  • enhance
  • cross-cultural communication
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