Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Foreigners should pay more to visit historical buildings than the local people. I completely disagree with
this
statement because everyone
has equal rights
to see this
and they have come from a far
place and already spent a heavy Correct your spelling
afar
amount
in
travelling.
Verify preposition usage
of
on
Firstly
, historical places
are not personal properties so everyone
has equal rights
on
it. These are the Change preposition
to
assests
of mankind. A single government and nation cannot state their complete right on it. If local pay less as Correct your spelling
assets
a
Change the article
an
entry
price
, this
is complete an unfair practise
. Travellers from all around the world have Replace the word
practice
same
Add an article
the same
rights
like
them. Change preposition
as
For instance
, Taj Mahal ticket price
is same
for Add an article
the same
everyone
. This
building was built by a Mughal emperor and a single government cannot have complete right on
it. Change preposition
to
Hence
, due to human rights
there should be Add a comma
,rights
same
Add an article
the same
entry
prices for these.
Secondly
, travellers come from a different country and spend an enormous amount
to reach these places
. They pay a huge amount
to take flights and cabs. Further
, they pay a huge amount
for accomodation
too. If again a more Correct your spelling
accommodation
price
is asked for entry
to these places
, this
is not justified. A government's duty is to motivate tourists to travel again but not to demotivate them. A double or more price
than local residants
is Correct your spelling
residents
source
of demotivation. Add an article
the source
a source
For instance
, a recent research state that tourists do not prefer those places
which charge double
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double-entry
entry
prices from foriegners
. Correct your spelling
foreigners
Therefore
, they already had paid huge charges to finally
reach the destination, same
Change the article
the same
price
will be a treat for them to visit again.
In conclusion, asking a more price
from tourists from different countries is not a wise decision. They already paid huge expenses and it is everyone
's equal rights
to visit these buildings.Submitted by Priya on
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