Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Foreigners should pay more to visit historical buildings than the local people. I completely disagree with
this
statement because
everyone
has equal
rights
to see
this
and they have come from
a far
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place and already spent a heavy
amount
in
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travelling.
Firstly
, historical
places
are not personal properties so
everyone
has equal
rights
on
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it. These are the
assests
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assets
of mankind. A single government and nation cannot state their complete right on it. If local pay less as
a
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entry
price
,
this
is complete an unfair
practise
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. Travellers from all around the world have
same
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the same
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rights
like
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as
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them.
For instance
, Taj Mahal ticket
price
is
same
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for
everyone
.
This
building was built by a Mughal emperor and a single government cannot have complete right
on
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it.
Hence
, due to human
rights
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there should be
same
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the same
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entry
prices for these.
Secondly
, travellers come from a different country and spend an enormous
amount
to reach these
places
. They pay a huge
amount
to take flights and cabs.
Further
, they pay a huge
amount
for
accomodation
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accommodation
too. If again a more
price
is asked for
entry
to these
places
,
this
is not justified. A government's duty is to motivate tourists to travel again but not to demotivate them. A double or more
price
than local
residants
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residents
is
source
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the source
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of demotivation.
For instance
, a recent research state that tourists do not prefer those
places
which charge
double
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entry
prices from
foriegners
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foreigners
.
Therefore
, they already had paid huge charges to
finally
reach the destination,
same
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price
will be a treat for them to visit again. In conclusion, asking a more
price
from tourists from different countries is not a wise decision. They already paid huge expenses and it is
everyone
's equal
rights
to visit these buildings.
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