Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money ? What other factors contribute towards happiness ?

Few people

accepts

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that

money

is the major element in

individuals

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an individuals

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life

and it can bring joyfulness in their

life

. In my opinion, surprisingly

happiness

cannot be purchased with currency in

this

world as well as there are some things which bring

lot

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a lot

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of

happiness

in a mankind

life

. On the one hand, What is the role of

money

in human

life

? According to my view, Every person wants to earn

money

to

fulfill

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their children and family needs. In fact, if parents can't give

happiness

to their kids

then

money

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the money

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is not worthy.

Moreover

, prosperous people spend their bucks lavishly on their children wedding,diamond

jewelleries

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jewellery

pieces of jewellery

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,designers clothing etc.

For Instance

, if children

is

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depressed with their marriage

then

obiviously

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obviously

spending all that

money

on

wedding

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a wedding

the wedding

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is inappropriate and

no

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use as they are not happy. So, Everything

is not relate

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to

money

in

perspective

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the perspective

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of

happiness

.

On the other hand

, Apart from

cash

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,cash

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many other things can provide a lot of

happiness

that can

be describe

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. If people

prefers

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prefer

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to stay with family which could

result

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inresult

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them in

happiness

? In

this

context, Many persons

feels

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feel

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more happy

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happier

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to spend quality time at home along with their family especially with kids. It captures a lot of memorable moments while playing with them.

For Example

, On weekends every individual visits

restaurants

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restaurant

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, shopping malls, cinema with family as that leads to unique

happiness

to them because they enjoy each and every moment of

happiness

. In conclusion, I believe that

money

cannot buy all

happiness

and

also

staying with family,friends leads to

happiness

.