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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

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The leisure
time
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 of many
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 is spent watching
television
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. The negative impact of
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 is that it prevents them from interacting with friends and family, as well as making them inactive and lethargic. I agree with
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 statement, because staring at a screen for a long
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 of
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 reduces an individuals
ability
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 to focus, and sitting down for many hours lowers a persons
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 to move, by reducing energy levels and muscle strength.
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, staring at the
television
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 screen for a long
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 of
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 can reduce the cognitive
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 of a
person
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.
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 is because when a
person
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 watches tv they do not need to use a great deal of brain function, as they are mostly just receiving information that does not require action.
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, action films are filled with explosions and fighting scene, which are visually pleasing
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 but do not require much analysis or cognitive
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 to understand.
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, over
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 brain function will decrease and basic abilities
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 as talking to someone become harder to do.
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, when watching tv for a long
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 your body will become less active.
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 is because sitting down for a long
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 of
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 prevents you from exercising, which is vital for health and wellbeing.
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, if you do not exercise regularly,
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 your muscle tone will reduce and your cardiovascular system will
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 become weaker.
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, ones
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 to move effectively will become harder and the
person
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 will become more lethargic. In conclusion, I agree that watching
television
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 for a long
period
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 of
time
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 will negatively impact a
person
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's social life and their health and wellbeing, by making them lazy and unable to communicate effectively with those around them.
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, it would be better to avoid spending so much of your free
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 watching
television
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.

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