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Today more and more old cities are being rebuilt and redesigned in order to be modernized. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

#cities #trend
In
this
 modern era, westernization is gaining ground all over the globe very rapidly. Nowadays,
trend
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 of modernization can be seen over old
cities
 which are now transforming modern
cities
 that
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 both positive as well as negative sides. Here,
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 would like to an account for positive and negative sides with my own perception. There are manifold points to explain its advantages.
First
 and foremost, westernization in old
cities
provide
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 a luxurious and comfortable lifestyle
to
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 people so they can relish it. To explain, a good infrastructure not only provide
wider
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 road but
also
spacious
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 building that plays
phenomenal
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 role in the life of city people.
Thus
,
city
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a city
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with
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full of all type amenities is like a dream come true and play
wonderful
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 role in people life to live with comfort.
In addition
, developed
cities
 can progress very fast in every aspect
such
 as employment, medical services and education.
Hence
, progress is the major part to achieve success in every field.
Therefore
, to build a wealthy nation developed
cities
 work as salt in
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. Numerous points to explain its negative side.
Initially
, government spending lavishly to rebuild old
cities
 and that
money
 can be used for other necessary fields
such
 as education, employment and medical to create these field
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.
As a result
, extravagance
on
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 old
cities
 only for modernization is not
an
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 brilliant idea though
this
 precious
money
 can able to educate poor children as well as provide
them
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 shelter and other basic need. From my notion, both aspects have their own significance.
money
 spending on reconstruction of an old building can be used for other important field but
i
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 still think that it is lucrative to do progress in
this
 fast pace world. To recapitulate, though modernization can bring process yet the government should spending
money
 sensibly in every part of
cities
also
 taking concern for other necessary matters.
Submitted by Ahmet Münir KOCAMAN on

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