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Some universities now offer their courses on the internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development

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Education is essential in every walk of life. Owing to
this
, courses are now uploaded on the internet by several
universities
 to impart knowledge to individuals through the online platform. I am in the consent that
this
 step taken by the
universities
 paves the way for constructive progress.
This
 essay will
further
 analyse some supportive reasons regarding my opinion. To initiate with, one major reason
of
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this
 worthwhile development is that one can learn about international course just staying in her or his own country.
In other words
, masses would be able to gain knowledge about the studies related to that course by attending the lecture online, in
this
 way they do not have to go
in
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 that nation for attendance of the classes and could gain plenty of knowledge in
such
 a comfortable way. In
year
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 2020, as an instance, various
pupils
 had attended their courses online as the flights were not allowed to visit one place to another in that span of
period
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 due to the pandemic.
In addition
 to
this
, another reason is that more students would tend to take admissions in
such
universities
. To elaborate it more, as much as educational institutions will offer courses, more
pupils
 would be attracted towards them. Resultingly, it would be beneficial for both the aspect. As
pupils
 would get a chance to know about the educational system of other countries as well. Ultimately, they could
also
 go there in future to pursue their dream job related to that field. To exemplify, Canada's
universities
 have begun online classes for all the students who are in other countries, so
pupils
further
 could go there, after completing the studies or in between the studies. In conclusion,
although
 there are some drawbacks of
this
,
however
, I consider that there are more effective impacts for people living in
different
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 country
such
 as attending classes from their comfort zones as well as it would be advantageous for
universities
 along with
pupils
.
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  • Distance learning
  • Flexible schedule
  • Virtual classroom
  • Digital resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Asynchronous learning
  • Synchronous learning
  • Cost-effective
  • Self-paced study
  • Technical difficulties
  • Blended learning
  • Online modules
  • Remote access
  • Student engagement
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