An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It has been observed in recent few years that many professionals, especially doctors and teachers, are leaving their own regions to get employed in well-developed
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like the USA. The term for
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phenomena is brain drain.
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situation has been instigated by many reasons
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as lack of suitable
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and lack of sufficient funding to carry out their experiments.
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has caused major issues in terms of proper human resources and the situation is worsening day-by-day. One of the burning issues of poor and developing states is brain drain. These nations have been investing in growing their bright children in different fields.
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, due to lack of suitable future
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, they opt to go and work in the developed
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as the USA, the UK etc, as they provide better salaries and
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for their services.
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, in India, the doctors graduating from AIIMS, the best medical college. After getting their degree, they fly to other
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. Another reason is maybe they are not getting sufficient help and funds from the
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authorities for their experiment, and
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, universities and governments from other
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lure them to their
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and utilise them for their own. For the developing
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as well as poor
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,
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phenomena has created a major issue. Even after investing huge amounts, the cream of these
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is leaving them in the same degraded state as before without contributing. The same services from the scholars, who got their education and training from there, are need to be imported, costing these nations hugely. Teachers, who are the most important architect of building our future, are
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leaving,
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causing the juniors are not getting the best guidance they could get, and
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, the juniors couldn't use their full potential. Take ,
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, teachers like Dr Amartya Sen and Dr Kharbanda, pioneers of economics, are teaching in foreign
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rather than India, their own
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.
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, the
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are getting depleted of the same quality services.
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to conclude, to end or reduce
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import, I would suggest the
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of these nations should help create better
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. They are rightly investing in building these bright minds and properly guiding them, but they should
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invest in their opportunity. As they can help create a better future for their own
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and change the status of the nation from the developing or the poor ones to the developed. The scholars should
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consider the facilities they were provided by the
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and the hard-earning taxpayers of their
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. They should help the
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and the
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and not greedily go for better wages.
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