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As a country develops, more people are able to purchase a car. Do you think that the positive for the individual outweigh the negatives for the environment?

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It is generally thought that the development of a country brings about a rise
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 the number of
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 bought by individuals in a rapidly changing world. While I accept that owning a car has positive sides
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 society, I completely believe that they are more likely to have some demerits. On the one hand, there are several benefits of possessing a car in today's complex society. A more positive implication is that people's
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 on public transport could probably be reduced by individual vehicles. As a consequence of
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, there will be no crowd of people in the buses, undergrounds or other public transportations.
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 may commute in a very cosy
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 if they use their own
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, if you travel to a far-off destination, in
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 road trip your vehicle will provide a decent shelter during nights.
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, I would argue that these aforementioned benefits are outweighed by drawbacks.
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 and foremost, the increase of CO2 emission would possibly be triggered by
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climbing car purchasing.
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, researchers have found evidence that a vehicle used by individuals emit 6.4 kg CO2 footprint over a 6 km tour. Another key sticking point can be thought that once nations commence
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 their own
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, it is inevitable that there will be a sharp rise in the traffic congestion, which might cause delays on the roads.
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, the use of
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 should not be disregarded by folks. To conclude, it seems to me that the potential dangers of using a private vehicle are more significant than its merits.
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, society must make sure that whether or not their own transports will benefit them in the future.
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