As a country develops, more people are able to purchase a car. Do you think that the positive for the individual outweigh the negatives for the environment?

It is generally thought that the development of a country brings about a rise

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the number of

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bought by individuals in a rapidly changing world. While I accept that owning a car has positive sides

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society, I completely believe that they are more likely to have some demerits. On the one hand, there are several benefits of possessing a car in today's complex society. A more positive implication is that people's

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on public transport could probably be reduced by individual vehicles. As a consequence of

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, there will be no crowd of people in the buses, undergrounds or other public transportations.

Besides

that,

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may commute in a very cosy

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if they use their own

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.

For example

, if you travel to a far-off destination, in

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road trip your vehicle will provide a decent shelter during nights.

However

, I would argue that these aforementioned benefits are outweighed by drawbacks.

First

and foremost, the increase of CO2 emission would possibly be triggered by

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climbing car purchasing.

For example

, researchers have found evidence that a vehicle used by individuals emit 6.4 kg CO2 footprint over a 6 km tour. Another key sticking point can be thought that once nations commence

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their own

cars

, it is inevitable that there will be a sharp rise in the traffic congestion, which might cause delays on the roads.

Therefore

, the use of

cars

should not be disregarded by folks. To conclude, it seems to me that the potential dangers of using a private vehicle are more significant than its merits.

Thus

, society must make sure that whether or not their own transports will benefit them in the future.