Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience..

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It is argued by some individuals that putting

animals

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cages

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is morally incorrect while others contend that it is gainful for both humans and

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essay agrees that it is not right to keep

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in captivity since their abandonment leads to problems and they require freedom in order to maintain a satisfying life. Some people claim that keeping

animals

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cages

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keeps them safe from the harsh realities of life. While encaged,

animals

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will not get hunted by predators and will be shielded from extreme changes in climate. Unfortunately, zoos often kill or abandon

animals

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which are surplus to their requirements. As

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, it is not certain that they will be safer in

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, letting go of an animal who is raised in a zoo would lead to it not being able to adapt to the natural environment quick enough to survive. Science shows us that

animals

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have emotions. It is wrong to keep them in

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since they lose their ability to roam around as well as engage in recreational activity with each other.

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, they feel a loss of control and become anxious which can lead to them attacking humans.

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has a worsening

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on their physical health.

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, in a recent survey in South

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it was shown that 80% of lions in captivity shows symptoms of agitation or obesity. To conclude, keeping

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leads to emotional and physical problems for them as well as a possibility of them attacking humans.

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, they should be left free to wander in their natural habitat.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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animal rights
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ethical considerations
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psychological well-being
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educational programs
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human superiority
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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.