It Is Better For Young People To Get Advice From Old People Than Young Ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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every

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around the world

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been

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a lot from the past ,

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and mindsets. I totally disagree with

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have

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somuch

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so much

so some advice that old

people

will give to young

people

may not related to

this

generation

. Old

people

would like to said that they

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a lot

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young

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generation

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people

so they need to

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what

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old

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said but

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didn't

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like that

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didn't

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like that because the world always developing and always changing so

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thought that young

people

are know

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better than old

people

. On the other hands, if young

people

need

a advice

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advice

a piece of advice

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about how to live in the society or how to be a good person old

people

might give

a better information

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better information

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instead

of asking the same

generation

of

people

. To

sumup

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, I disagree with

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statement because the worlds always change and old

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might don't know

alot

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a lot

of things so it will be better if young

generation

will give the

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advice

advices

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to old

people

instead

of old

peole

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people

give them a

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advice

advices

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advice

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