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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think children’s time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is irrefutable that physical
education
 classes are required in school syllabus. On
one
 hand, parents stand for physical training classes as part of their syllabus in schools but on the other
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 some parents believe that
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 not have a significant role in
child's
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a child's
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 development. In the following paragraphs, I intend to discuss both the views and put forth my opinion below. On
one
 hand,
school based
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education
 tends to provide overall development for a child. Physical
education
 tends to
stregthen
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strengthen
one
's body and
also
 mind.
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, some children are better
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sports
 than
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academic
academics
 subjects. They may turn out to be a good
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 if initiatives are taken to identify and provide coachings. Most of the talents are
in-born
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 but it needs to
trained
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 in the right way.
One
 the other hand, learning subjects like science, language and maths give them a wide range of knowledge for the betterment of their life in future
such
 that they can survive in any situation.
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, it is often said if a person has good vocabulary and communication skills, they will be able to survive in any situation and earn. After pondering upon bothe views, in my opinion, physical
education
 must be provided in every school. Getting involved in
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team
 activities can help children to understand several situations like controlling their emotions, how to behave in a team. To summarise,
sports
 or any
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 activities helps a person to relax and
also
 helps them to inculcate
this
 into daily
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routine
routines
.
Therefore
, all educations institute
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curriculum
 must include
sports related
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 time which can help them
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 mental stability.
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