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While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is often claimed by some people that the increase in Earth’s temperature is the worst issue faced by humanity in recent times, while others think that the forest destruction has a more detrimental effect on the world. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I believe deforestation is the most serious problem nowadays. On the one hand, ice sheets are melting
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 a fast pace never seen before due to
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global warming. As an illustration of
this
, a recent survey has shown that the world’s glaciers will much likely have disappeared within the
next
 century.
As a result
, animals
such
 as polar bears which depend on
this
 environment to survive are facing an alarming risk of going extinct.
Furthermore
, several people are suffering from natural disasters,
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 severe floodings and storms.
This
 is because the rising temperatures provoke extreme weather conditions which change the climate.
On the other hand
, deforestation is causing even worse consequences
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 our planet. To start off, since forests play a vital role in absorbing carbon dioxide and releasing oxygen, its destruction means that the greenhouse gases will stay on the
athmosphere
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atmosphere
 trapping heat from the Sun, leading ultimately to global warming.
Moreover
, several species are losing its habitats and becoming endangered by the constant cutting down of trees.
Consequently
, wholes ecosystems are being disrupted which is harming the biodiversity of our flora and fauna. In conclusion, even though global heating has a detrimental impact on the world, I believe that deforestation is a more critical issue because it not only contributes to the rise of Earth’s average temperature, but it
also
 harms a large number of animals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Greenhouse effect
  • Industrial emissions
  • Sea levels
  • Extreme weather events
  • Biodiversity
  • Carbon emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Paris Climate Accord
  • Carbon cycle
  • Soil erosion
  • Water cycles
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Reforestation
  • Sustainable forest management
  • Indigenous communities
  • Localized impacts
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