To solve ever-increasing environments hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. what is your opinion on the above assumption?
In 20th century pollution by
vehicles
has been inclined due to cheaper fuel
and inefficient engine design . while global warming has affected enormously the world's environment ,increasing the fuel
prices is not the
comfortable solution.Change the article
a
This
essay emphasize
the fact that environmental hazards can be handled better with alternative measures.
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emphasizes
Firstly
,fuel
-based vehicles
are not solely responsible for contaminating the atmosphere .There are multiple factors which affect this
such
as industrial and agricultural waste also
inefficient old vehicles
.Numerous amount of old motorbikes have old engines which supply fuel
and convert it to deadly carbon dioxide ,increasing the fuel
price will stop consumers from purchasing wheels ,however
, it won't stop pollution. To illustrate , In India with high tax rates and fuel
prices also
people are still funding automobiles, to control this
government has banned the sale of Bharat service four engines which was
prone to infect habitat.
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were
On the other hand
, increased fuel
prices will force the consumer to use more public or electric-based transports.Due to inclination in combustible sources population below the poverty level can no longer afford the vehicles
. heavy road tax also
plays a crucial role in this
. A vehicle maintenance cost will be much higher due to this
.For instance
, the Majority of Delhi residents relies on Delhi
metro system as its fastest and cheapest mode of transportation. Vast individuals are getting attracted to tesla electric automobile than luxury cars.
To conclude , We can't blame gasoline for environmental hazards as industrial and agricultural waste Add an article
the Delhi
also
play a significant role. to control the contamination we can ban the industrial wastage to be thrown at rivers or in an open environment . Controlling public transport also
will provide great aid to the cause such
as old even rules for automobiles on road.Submitted by dalairuchi7 on
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