To solve ever-increasing environments hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. what is your opinion on the above assumption?

In 20th century pollution by
vehicles
has been inclined due to cheaper
fuel
and inefficient engine design . while global warming has affected enormously the world's environment ,increasing the
fuel
prices is not
the
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comfortable solution.
This
essay
emphasize
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the fact that environmental hazards can be handled better with alternative measures.
Firstly
,
fuel
-based
vehicles
are not solely responsible for contaminating the atmosphere .There are multiple factors which affect
this
such
as industrial and agricultural waste
also
inefficient old
vehicles
.Numerous amount of old motorbikes have old engines which supply
fuel
and convert it to deadly carbon dioxide ,increasing the
fuel
price will stop consumers from purchasing wheels ,
however
, it won't stop pollution. To illustrate , In India with high tax rates and
fuel
prices
also
people are still funding automobiles, to control
this
government has banned the sale of Bharat service four engines which
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prone to infect habitat.
On the other hand
, increased
fuel
prices will force the consumer to use more public or electric-based transports.Due to inclination in combustible sources population below the poverty level can no longer afford the
vehicles
. heavy road tax
also
plays a crucial role in
this
. A vehicle maintenance cost will be much higher due to
this
.
For instance
, the Majority of Delhi residents relies on
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metro system as its fastest and cheapest mode of transportation. Vast individuals are getting attracted to tesla electric automobile than luxury cars. To conclude , We can't blame gasoline for environmental hazards as industrial and agricultural waste
also
play a significant role. to control the contamination we can ban the industrial wastage to be thrown at rivers or in an open environment . Controlling public transport
also
will provide great aid to the cause
such
as old even rules for automobiles on road.
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