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To what extend internet has made our lives more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from you own knowledge or experience.

#internet #lives
The development of
internet
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 has dramatically changed the way people use it miscellaneously in
this
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majority’s
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 lives easier in terms of communication and studying.
This
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 assistance in these spheres and give relevant examples. It is undeniably true that the
Internet
 plays a crucial role in everyone’s life, regardless the age. There are many factors which I would consider to substantiate my point of view.
First
 and foremost,
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 is the easiest way to communicate since it blurs the boundary between continents.
For instance
,
instead
 of spending money for phoning or sending letters and waiting for a reply for days on end, people can easily interact with each other by using email as well as social media sites
such
 as Facebook or Skype which offers not only a text chat
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 but
also
 a video chat too. What’s more,
internet
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 has made
an
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education more effective, as it contains millions of information
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 various topics, which can be easily found.
Furthermore
, due to the current situation with pandemic which was caused by a novel strain of coronavirus, distance learning has been accepted worldwide.
This
 method of education cannot be realized without the
Internet
, which means it is essential in studying. From what has been discussed above, here should be drawn a conclusion that the powerful benefits of the
internet
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 a subject of frequent debates.
Nonetheless
, it has an integral meaning in the 21st century, definitely, making our lives more convenient.
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