The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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web definitely opened up a huge prospective
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how
data
is made available and used. But
also
, has increased the complexities in
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late. The following paragraphs would talk about the problems that the
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has created and about the possible solutions to overcome them. The main issue
that is
on the rise currently is
misuse
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a misuse
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of the
data
.
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increase in
cyber crimes
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and
data
theft. People involved in these are mostly the youth of
this
generation who have more than needed access to the sources. Hacking computers and stealing
data
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new trend among young people. A survey conducted in 2020 says that 33 billion records would be stollen by the end of 2023. Another snag that the cyberspace has led to, is
availability
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the availability
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of
age sensitive
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content.
Such
websites are accessible by all without any discretion leading to the growth of crime on women like rapes, honey traps and murders.
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of morphing tools as a free source is the cause of honey traps and blackmailing women. Access to pornographic content has been
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main cause
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rapes. Possible solutions for the
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pointers could be
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, increasing
data
security by using strong passwords, changing them on a frequent basis and securing one's computer or laptop by
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active spyware or malware.
Second
, securing one's wireless network.
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, using
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parental
paternal
control applications on a device in order to prevent access to inappropriate content to children. Fourth, using social media responsibly. The invention of the hyperspace is for sure a sign of
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of technology and is beneficial if used with prudence.
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