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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

#people #exercise #time
Exercise
 has a significant contributory
in
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health
.
However
, in recent years depending on modern
life
people
 has not enough
exercise
 either in a workplace or in leisure time. Sedentary comes from working policy, modern
life
, unhealthy lifestyle. In workplaces many employees have to sit in their vacancy and work hard, their employer asks to never have
exercise
;
therefore
, those kinds of policy harm employee
health
 that unfortunately employers did not care
staff
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health
;
moreover
; they prefer their short-term benefits to long-term employee
health
. It depends on modern
life
people
use
 to technologies in their
life
 to improve their
life
 level,
however
, more using technologies
such
 as TV and food makers can reduce or
exercise
 in routine
life
;
in addition
,
people
 do not
use
 public transport and they would
use
 their own private car, when
people
use
 their own car
instead
 of public transport or bicycles, they reduce their
exercise
 in
life
;
therefore
, it is might ta faces
health
 problems
such
 as arthritis. The
last
 but not least is
people
 did not pay attention
sports
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, because if
people
 put some activities like going to gem or walking in their plan its can be very needful for has
healthy
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a healthy
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life
, if
people
use
sports
 in their
life
 they can be fresh and has a healthy
life
 to do the best their jobs and educations. To summarize, certain ineluctable hobbies cause
people
 to face a dearth of
exercise
 in their daily
life
. In my opinion, job opportunity and employer policy is a negative impact on employees and the government should settle some rules to improve jobs environments. Modern
life
 and using plenty of technology in
life
 reduced
people
 activities and might face
people
 with many diseases;
therefore
,
people
 should do not
use
 too many technologies in their
life
. Being unhealthy lifestyle
people
 do not attend their body. They must be using
sports
 time in their
life
 and mass media should learn
people
 how includes
sports
 time in routine
life
.
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