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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays,
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 is replacing many different types of original sources of information and
year
 by
year
 more people prefer to use
Internet
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. Many futurists believe that in the
future
, there will be no need
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 printing and buying books and newspapers due to
presence
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the presence
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 of their electronic
analogs
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. I agree with
this
 statement
,
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 since all news and books are available
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online even now and in the nearest
future
 paper will become more expensive.
First
 of all, it is
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an undeniable
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 fact that newspapers are becoming less and less popular today. People choose online news due to their availability and no need
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 payment.
For instance
, if someone wants to buy a newspaper, he or she should go to
special
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 place and wait some time. Whereas, online news
are
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 the fastest way to be aware of actual events and no need to go somewhere.
Secondly
, making newspapers and books will be unprofitable in the
future
.
Year
 by
year
, mankind cut off millions of trees in order to make papers, and in the
future
, they become expensive To elucidate,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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