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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays every
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 are super busy.
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, most of the
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, who are doing the job,
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 do any physical activities in their free
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 or busy days. For
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 reason, they fall into health problems. In
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 essay, I will find
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 reason why
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don’t
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 do certain
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 and will find some possible solutions. These days
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 are busy with their
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 have no drought. Most of the working
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 do overtime for their personal and professional commitments.
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, living expenses are going to expensive
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 by
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 so to earn money
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 have worked hard to earn money. For
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 reason, when they will back from
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, they are super tired and they
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 go to the gym or do any other
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.
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, in the free
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 or free
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 or , a holiday they may fall to sleep or watch TV and sometimes play video games. They try to relax except doing any physical
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, without doing any physical
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people
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 fall into various health problems. To solve
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 problem, need to take some initiative by the Government as well as privately.
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, the Government can run some awareness campaigning for physical
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 to make
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 understand the benefits of it. Not only the Government but
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 the private company can take some actions. A private company can create some indoor game, which needs physical attachment like Badminton, Table Tennis etc. So, during the
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 hour workers can take some
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 to do physical activities. In conclusion,
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people
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 are getting super busy
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 they should
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 aware of their health. If they
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 keep them physically fit, they will be weak and can’t do more hard
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 for their family. In my opinion, only personal awareness can make
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 active to do physical
exercise
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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