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More and more parents begin to allow their children to play on computers and tablets as they think children should learn technology skills. Do advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages or not?

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It is
ture
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true
 that a growing number of parents start permitting their offspring to play on digital products in order to help them
aquire
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acquire
 technology skills.
Although
this
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scenario
 carry a few
advantages
, disadvantages outweigh its
advantages
 for reasons listed below. It is a good thing for
children
 to entertain with
computers
 and
tablets
 at an early age for several factors.
To begin
, once they get familiar with these gadgets, they may develop
the
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 interest in finding out how these work and get into the field of programming. It is a job area demanding
much working
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labor
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.
Besides
,
computers
 and
tablets
 are so efficient in improving our working productivity that they are common in every office. People are supposed to get hang of technology skills of utilizing these tools, which are
also
 beneficial to organize their studying.
However
, drawbacks deriving from using
computers
 and
tablets
 in childhood are more noteworthy than
advantages
.
Firstly
,
children
 might spend too much time sitting in front of screens which is bad for their eyesight and overall health.
Secondly
, if
children
 get addicted to these machines, they will not have time to finish their school work, lose interest in studying and
finally
 might drop out of school. What is more,
children
 tend to play
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 gadgets alone and might not socialize with classmates and friends, which is harmful to their social relationship. In conclusion, individuals might learn some
techonology
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technology
 skills by playing
computers
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 and
tablets
 when they are young, but
potentail
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potential
diadvantages
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disadvantages
 overweigh those
advantages
 unless they use these gadgets reasonably.
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