In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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decades, we have witnessed a great breakthrough in technology. Typically, all kinds of traditional forms of reading
such
as
books
or printed
newspapers
have gradually been replaced by using
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. And it is predicted that people will totally read everything they want online
instead
of purchasing printed
newspapers
or
books
. I partly agree with that prediction, in some case, people
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for
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one. There is an indispensable fact that electronic
newspapers
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books
bring a wide range of benefits for users.
First
of all, thanks to
this
modern way, we can effortlessly read everything we want whenever we own a private computer or mobile phone.
Secondly
, electronic newspaper and
books
store a vast amount of information and stories, those ones will be opened quickly via a click of a button,
thus
we freely select what we want to read or our
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stories as well as the data we need for our researching.
Additionally
, electronic
books
and
newspapers
provide us with a plethora of reliable information without worrying to lose them.
Finally
, the most predominant advantage is that the online one hardly costs
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to access,just by enrolling the e-
newspapers
or
books
app in the mobile phone as well as computer,we can conveniently read them without charging.
However
,a minority of people still buy printed
newspapers
or
books
to meet the demand for their reading. Since they believe actual
newspapers
or
books
are the precious values of human beings which have been created by our ancestors in retrospect, overexploiting internet to read will gradually erode traditional values.
Furthermore
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or the depletion of battery in your mobile phone will have
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adverse effect on their reading process, that probably results in feeling a bit sense of anger To sum up, we have to give priority to utilize
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online
newspapers
and
books
, but at the same time, we shouldn't entirely eliminate the traditional forms of reading.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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