The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi tech media such as computer software. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A lot of millennial are of the notion that
libraries
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should utilize the available space in an organized way by providing access to unlimited books rather than misusing the allocated area for digital media. I partially agree with the aforementioned statement. I believe that
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should encapsulate digital and traditional learning forms under the one roof so that people can take maximum benefit from the resources available. Analyzing the statement, it is advocated that
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purpose of the
libraries
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is to provide reading material to the readers so that they can enhance their knowledge. The access to
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and other digital channels disturb the concentration of the users, as they invest their time in useless activities
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accessing social networking and online shopping sites.
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, using computers for
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time at stretch may affect the
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of
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the individual
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.
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, availability of computers and
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DVDs
in public
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has many add on advantages
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as if there is non-availability of
book
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the book
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a person can still access its e-book version and can
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save the important text for later use. It
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multiplies the accesses for the same book and the library staff does not need to maintain copies
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single book.
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, time can be saved as books need not
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be organized in the racks.
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, by watching videos
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same lecture can be repeated multiple times
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, learning becomes easier. In conclusion, computers have many benefits which
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the problem of accessing
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edition of books available in
libraries
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, high usage of internet can have
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impact on the health of the individual.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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