Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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in my opinion, I totally agree with the given statement because online
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have hurt individual and Society due to social networking
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are becoming isolate from
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increasing why social media and common man are facing my red of health issues like Brain Tumor and depression due to the excessive
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of mobile networking At the onset, most of the
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Facebook and Twitter for their entertainment but due to the excessive
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blogs are becoming isolates from their loved one because I want to live in a virtual
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with their friends.
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have University to talk with their online friends with the help of social networking
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Father reveals that due to the social networking
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crime rate are increasing day by day because most of the hacker easily hack the count of users like bank account as well as email account which create
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but not the least due to the excessive
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of online
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like Instagram Twitter Snapchat
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beaches dangerous for individuals life To conclude that the rise of social networking site as heart friends as well as
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so late from their society and it
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bad health issues
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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