Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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These days, there is a lot of
information
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around our life and all over the world. For sure, some of them are really useful but others could be very harmful so we would better not to know.
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, the rotten governments’ secrets, something that can cause disaster in one country and so on. In
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essay, I would like to discuss both kinds of
information
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. On the one hand, there is something we should know.
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, COVID-19, which is a
virus
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that can bring
people
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disease to their lung is a serious problem all around the world.
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virus
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is spreading so fast through
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human saliva and makes a person ill. Tons of
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already died because of the
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and
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dying now. In
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situation, we have to know the path of the person who is infected to prevent more infection.
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the government should let citizen know where they visited and make
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who contacted them get tested.
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, there is
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so much
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that we don’t need to know.
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, something private,
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as infectee’s name, age or where they live. Because these are not really important to stop the spreading
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. If the government reveal all these personal
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, many other citizens could be scared or put infected
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in danger. In conclusion, of course, we have a curiosity about things that happen in our country or in the world and
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we have the right to know.
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, sometimes, it is not healthy for us to know everything.
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, we got to learn how to distinguish what is useful and what is useless.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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