Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters.Do you agree or disagree?

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nation should provide financial aid to
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developing republic in act of
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. Due to inadequate infrastructure and lack of disaster relief
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it's almost impossible for poor nations to cope up with financial burdens.
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essay agrees that wealthy countries can contribute to
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stricken population from another continent in case of
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.
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, most vibrant cause of environmental tragedies
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earthquake ,flood and tsunami. since
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is still not fully blossomed and currently in huge
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due to multiple loans for development ,
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hard for them to manage enormous people which are affected by natural misfortune. In
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rich kingdoms can come forward and
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government initiated relief funds. To illustrate when
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in
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was miserably affected by flood in 2016 where most of the individuals lost their shelter and job UAE donated
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amount to provide financial help to
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government .
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and UN are
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two most powerful organisation around
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which helps below poverty masses
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, humanitarian benefits can only be given in terms of
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.Numerous countries have huge
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mortgage
for these disasters which later on degrade their economy . While
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is still struggling with economic
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if another misfortune
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its status in
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market become poorer than before .
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lanka
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a coastal country is still in huge
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from china and
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bank as Tsunami hits their coasts .Even though relaxation of 100
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it is still not enough . To conclude , Financially strong societies should provide monetary support to poorer republics during natural calamity.Below poverty level countries can
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obtain aid from
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nation and
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it is subjected to economic growth.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Humanitarian relief
  • Infrastructure
  • Global solidarity
  • Disproportionately
  • External assistance
  • Rebuilding efforts
  • Disaster response
  • Investment in stability
  • Dependency theory
  • Responsible intervention
  • Paternalistic
  • Shared humanity
  • Sovereignty
  • Capabilities
  • Fatality rates
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