Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters.Do you agree or disagree?
Developed
nation should provide financial aid to Add an article
The developed
A developed
third
developing republic in act of Add an article
the third
a third
god
. Due to inadequate infrastructure and lack of disaster relief Change the capitalization
God
funds
it's almost impossible for poor nations to cope up with financial burdens.Add a comma
,funds
This
essay agrees that wealthy countries can contribute to Add a hyphen
poverty-stricken
poverty
stricken population from another continent in case of Add an article
the poverty
calamity
.
Add an article
a calamity
the calamity
firstly
, most vibrant cause of environmental tragedies are
earthquake ,flood and tsunami. since Change the verb form
is
third
Change the article
the third
world
is still not fully blossomed and currently in huge debt
due to multiple loans for development ,its
hard for them to manage enormous people which are affected by natural misfortune. In Replace the word
it's
it is
this
case
rich kingdoms can come forward and Add a comma
,case
sponser
government initiated relief funds. To illustrate when Correct your spelling
sponsor
kerala
in Change the capitalization
Kerala
india
was miserably affected by flood in 2016 where most of the individuals lost their shelter and job UAE donated Change the capitalization
India
huge
amount to provide financial help to Add an article
a huge
indian
government .
Change the capitalization
Indian
On the other hand
,World
bank
and UN are Change the capitalization
Bank
also
two most powerful organisation around globe
which helps below poverty masses Add an article
the globe
however
, humanitarian benefits can only be given in terms of debt
.Numerous countries have huge mortage
for these disasters which later on degrade their economy . While Correct your spelling
mortgage
nation
is still struggling with economic Add an article
the nation
a nation
debt
if another misfortune happen
its status in Change the verb form
happens
world
market become poorer than before . For example
sri
Change the capitalization
Sri
lanka
a coastal country is still in huge Change the capitalization
Lanka
debt
from china and world
bank as Tsunami hits their coasts .Even though relaxation of 100 milion
is provided by Correct your spelling
million
lender
it is still not enough .
To conclude , Financially strong societies should provide monetary support to poorer republics during natural calamity.Below poverty level countries can Add an article
the lender
also
obtain aid from united
nation and Add an article
the united
world
bank ,however
it is subjected to economic growth.Add a comma
,however
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